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@whalekeeper

Very good. It’s a delicate matter.

So Inglor is a monkey. 😀

Precisely.

That makes me think of the god-disguised-as-a-beggar, and I love the themes associated with that trope. Except in this case, you have a lot more variety going on. This is not just a message about judging a book by its cover – this is also about preconceived b…

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@Whalekeeper

ACK! I did not respond about Remi…

Ye. The whole story feels very French; I have a playlist and half the songs are just French.

That. Is. Fabulous. How else does one get into the right mood?

But it’s a fantasy and everyone gets into weird wacky hijinks. (With many games of croquet.)

Croquet! *stares into the distance h…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Smeltinggggggggg…… Yessss.

Technically he’s not an elfling, he’s a Dílis… that is, a descendant of the Vow Keepers. In his world “elf” is a racial slur. *narrows eyes at Koshka* But basically, yes. XD He has heightened senses generally, talks to trees, and is ridiculously agile. But his real gift is that he can see truth.…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

UGH OHMYGOSH THAT WOULD BE BEAUTIFUL. I would be very happy, but also very hyped up on sugar. All the time. I think my friends would throw a riot and steal the shop from me to restore my sanity.

@whalekeeper

I WANT TO EAT THAT. IT IS GORGEOUS.

👀👀👀👀👀👀

@whalekeeper

100% yes. That just sounds right with the universe.

…If cereal has a lot of milk, is it a soup?

……Are burritos/tacos a sandwich?

………Is ice cream beautiful? (That was rhetorical.)

@whalekeeper

Awwwww thaaaaaanks. There’s a reason I don’t drink caffeine. I would end the world with ice cream. And bread. 😊 Lembas bread.

Soooooo… ye like whaaaaales? Can you speak whale, like Dory? 🐳

(What’s this? More lembas bread.)

@elishavet-pidyon

Inglor! No!

*Grabs baby elfling*

*Yeets off into forest*

I think Inglor is the epitome of that “what are you going to do with the sharp edges of your soul?” “Cut vegetables.” meme.

@whalekeeper

…..

Please say Remi survives the book. I will happily read about all sorts of wild weird French Alice in Revolution Land, but…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Bwahahahhaha!

I won’t say don’t worry, but I think I finally found a way his story could turn out well. See, a perfect sphere is pretty, but something broken, something sharp – that could cut bonds.

Our faith is not destroyed by trials, and hope is not quenched by depression. Sometimes we need to break a little to be whole.

That…[Read more]

@loopylin

=D

@whalekeeper

Ironically… he does. Represented by a glowing river rock his dad helped him find.

*cue sudden revelation*

*thunder*

Nevermind. He’s totally gonna lose that rock. His hope must die. It’s his rock bottom. That’s the mortality. AAAHHHHHHHH.

I finally figured out the midpoint climax!!!!

But considering I want to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

His name somehow communicates that to me. Not concretely, but you know what I mean. It sounds dreamy to me, but also a little foreboding because of the –lor ending

Really? *feels imense satisfaction*

Hehehe.

I think I’m justified in nerding out a bit, and saying that I love it.

Yes, you are justified. Loving your story is ide…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Glad to make my contribution. *bows majestically*

That is valid. XD Inglor is my MC in the story we first set out to write in Ari’s world. It’s at least a thousand years after Ari and life is different, but there are still the same evils around. Somehow, even though whenever we actually write in his story he’s a bundle of…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Okay, those are hilarious and also call me out. How dare you. XD

Except I feel sorry for Remmington. XD

✨Graditude✨

@whalekeeper
*nods a thanks for closing the door; it’s a little crazy out there right now*

yes; comfort series.
hmm.. I like Kate ( though that seems predictable, but I sort of understand her).

I’m gonna have to say the first one is my favorite.

Why I like it: It has a lot of good points for me. One thing is that it has the child hero thi…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

It’s so weird not knowing everyone. It’s been the same people on here for almost 4 years and it feels so weird to introduce myself lol

@whalekeeper

Yeah, I opened my email and I was like WHATTT

And I logged onto Kingdom Pen and it’s very overstimulating 😭 I will get used to it I guess but wow it’s crazy

@whalekeeper
Should I be careful??;] Yes…I am a fan of mysterious Benedict society. You?

GUYS WHAT IN THE WORLD IS GOING ON

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper you guys are WHAT NOW???

And the KP people are ALIVE?!?!

I’ve been gone for so long lol I need to catch up hahahahaha

@esther-c @jonas @whalekeeper @keilah-h

After much thought (and casually disappearing again) I have decided what I want to do.

I’m still working on developing the plotline, as it has changed a lot.

I’m not sure if I’ll ever finish this story because I change it so much, but I honestly just write for fun so I guess if it’s fun, I should be…[Read more]

@whalekeeper
i know I’m not exactly part of this conversation, but i struggle with plotting and was reading your post. That is a brilliant way to do it! Thanks